Get honest feedback about what’s converting — and what to fix first.

I'll give you a detailed critique of your copy with in-context comments, plus a written summary that explains:

  • What’s working
  • What’s not
  • What’s unclear or hurting conversions
  • What to prioritize fixing first

What's included:

  • A line-by-line review of your copy with suggested edits
  • Comments throughout explaining the “why” behind my feedback
  • A keep/kill/rewrite list that makes it easy for you to make changes in a single sweep
  • A “customer perspective” rundown that tells you what a customer’s first impression looks like
  • A review of how your assets tie together (and tips to make the experience even better)
  • All delivered via Google Doc AND a Loom video walkthrough within 5 days of receiving your asset link

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Need deeper, more detailed feedback? A "Be BRUTAL" roast might be a better fit.

Pay once, then share links to 2 related assets — for example:

  • Sales page + follow-up email
  • Short email sequence + landing page
  • Two blog posts

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I'll take care of the rest.