Get honest feedback about what’s converting — and what to fix first.

I'll give you a detailed critique of your copy with in-context comments, plus a written summary that explains:

  • What’s working
  • What’s not
  • What’s unclear or hurting conversions
  • What to prioritize fixing first

What's included:

  • A line-by-line review of your copy with suggested edits
  • Comments throughout explaining the “why” behind my feedback
  • A keep/kill/rewrite list that makes it easy for you to make changes in a single sweep
  • A “customer perspective” rundown that tells you what a customer’s first impression looks like
  • A review of how your assets tie together (and tips to make the experience even better)
  • Links to other brands for inspiration
  • Rewrite suggestions you can swipe and use in your own copy
  • All delivered via Google Doc AND a Loom video walkthrough within 5 days of receiving your asset link

Pay once, then share links to 3+ assets that have a key impact on your conversions — for example:

  • Website home page + sales page + about page
  • Opt-in page + email sequence + upsell landing page
  • Longer email sequence (5-7 emails)

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I'll take care of the rest.